Based on the suggestions, I need to add a hook at the beginning of this speech, and a closing hood in the ending.
Introductory hook:
People love music, the majority people enjoy music in their daily life (perhaps an evidence), how to choose a right music player can be a problem troubles many people. Recently, Apple provides an option, let's see the commercial of this product.
Closing hook:
People trust the quality of Apple's products and their products and commercial are always creative. No matter people want to buy it or not, they remember it. At least add HomePod into their "consider list" before they actually need a music player.
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